Hi,
My name is Sue-Anne, and I'm currently a student at the University of Pennsylvania. One of the courses I'm taking has to do with public communication campaigns, and for my final project, I've decided to create pamphlets concerning the use of fluoride toothpaste on children between the ages of 2 and 5.
In order to create an effective campaign, it would be wonderful to get some insight from the people I'm interested in. I would really appreciate it if you could take a look at the first version of the pamphlet at: http://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0...MTUzZjcx&hl=en
Maybe you could tell me what you think. Would you have picked this pamphlet up if you saw it in a day care center? Does it contain information you're concerned with? What stood out to you the most? Are there any things I could change to improve it?
Thank you so much!
My name is Sue-Anne, and I'm currently a student at the University of Pennsylvania. One of the courses I'm taking has to do with public communication campaigns, and for my final project, I've decided to create pamphlets concerning the use of fluoride toothpaste on children between the ages of 2 and 5.
In order to create an effective campaign, it would be wonderful to get some insight from the people I'm interested in. I would really appreciate it if you could take a look at the first version of the pamphlet at: http://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0...MTUzZjcx&hl=en
Maybe you could tell me what you think. Would you have picked this pamphlet up if you saw it in a day care center? Does it contain information you're concerned with? What stood out to you the most? Are there any things I could change to improve it?
Thank you so much!
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