My Closing Letter..Does It Seem Cold?

[MomBoss]

There isnt much else i want to say but i feel like it seems cold . What do you think?

"It is with a heavy heart that I inform everyone that ****s Daycare will be closing. I will be moving to ****** and operating a new daycare program that specializes in infant and toddler development. Age 6 weeks- 3 years.

*For children age 3 and older, the last day of care will be August 23, 2019. If your child is under the age of 3 and you are interested in continuing care at my new residence, please let me know so we can set up a time for you to visit the daycare and learn about the new program.

These past few years I have truly enjoyed getting to be a part of each and every one of your child's lives. Thank you for a wonderful experience! "

[storybookending]

I think it sounds fine. Personally I would do a separate letter for those with children over the age of 3 and not even mention the new daycare.

[rosieteddy]

sounds perfect.

[Josiegirl]

I like it. It's friendly yet tells them what they need to know.

[DaveA]

Sounds good. Short, professional, and to the point.

Good luck with the new program. happyface

[knoxmomof2]

It's perfect! Gives enough information that you shouldn't have to answer too many questions and sounds sincere and kind.

[Blackcat31]

I will be moving to ****** and operating a new daycare program that specializes in infant and toddler development. Age 6 weeks- 3 years.

Are you changing over to a infant/toddler license?

[MomBoss]

Are you changing over to a infant/toddler license?

No im just not taking kids over 3

[Cat Herder]

I think it sounds fine. Personally I would do a separate letter for those with children over the age of 3 and not even mention the new daycare.

I agree. It is asking for push back otherwise.