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I posted the other day about the provider who copied a part of my cl ad.
Well, after thinking about it for a while, I ended up emailing her asking her to change the part of my ad that she copied.
This is mine:
I provide quality family style childcare in a small group setting. I am very hands on with the children and will treat your children like they are my own! I look forward to meeting you and your little one!
She changed it alright...to this:
I provide quality family style childcare in a small group setting. I am very hands on with the children and will treat your children like I would my own! I look forward to meeting you and your little one!
The words in bold are what she changed, are you kidding me!?
So I emailed her again and she changed it again to this:
I provide small group setting. I am a hands on with the children. I look forward to hearing from you.
She doesn't seem like the brightest crayon in the box!
Oh well, at least she changed it,
On a good note, I have a family coming by tonight to pick up paperwork and hopefully put down a deposit, if not I have an interview set up for Thursday!
Well, after thinking about it for a while, I ended up emailing her asking her to change the part of my ad that she copied.
This is mine:
I provide quality family style childcare in a small group setting. I am very hands on with the children and will treat your children like they are my own! I look forward to meeting you and your little one!
She changed it alright...to this:
I provide quality family style childcare in a small group setting. I am very hands on with the children and will treat your children like I would my own! I look forward to meeting you and your little one!
The words in bold are what she changed, are you kidding me!?
So I emailed her again and she changed it again to this:
I provide small group setting. I am a hands on with the children. I look forward to hearing from you.
She doesn't seem like the brightest crayon in the box!
Oh well, at least she changed it
, On a good note, I have a family coming by tonight to pick up paperwork and hopefully put down a deposit, if not I have an interview set up for Thursday!
: Made me laugh, at least.
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