Anyone Willing to Read my PHB and Contract and offer Constructive Criticism?

[SunshineMama]

Sorry for a million posts today!

I am revising my PHB, ready to use my backbone and not get screwed anymore.

Are any of you willing to read my PHB and offer constructive criticism?

I will PM it to you if so.

Thanks!

[Breezy]

I will! May take me a day or so to help revise though

[SunshineMama]

Thanks Breezy! I sent it to you in 3 different PM's because it was so long.

[Blackcat31]

I'll also look if you are interested in more feedback.

[CheekyChick]

Send it to me. I'd be happy to give my input/ideas.

[SunshineMama]

I'll also look if you are interested in more feedback.

Thanks Blackcat! I sent it to you in multiple PM's. I look forward to your input!

[jokalima]

Can I send mine to you guys to when I'm done with it? Please!!!!

[DaisyMamma]

I would be happy to take a look!

[SunshineMama]

Thanks everyone for looking and everyone else for offering! I sent it out to a lot of you and can't wait to hear your responses