Your Input And Advice Needed What Do You Think??

[daycare]

What do you guys think about the way I wrote this? How does it look? What would you add or take away??



This Gift Certificate entitles you to one Free Friday
Parents night out from 7:00 PM-10:00PM
From ______________ and Preschool, State Licensed and Insured
Your child or children will enjoy fun games, child friendly movie and a healthy snack.
• Good for up to Three children from the same family!
• Ages 1 month to 12 years old
• PNO must be booked 2 weeks in advance, no credits, transfers or make-ups.
• Additional hours can be requested prior to reservation for $15.00 per hour.
• Family must be willing to sign liability waiver
• No appointments will be accepted on Friday, March 30th
Expires on 1/01/2012
Call and book your Free Parents Night Out with________________

[Michael]

Gift Certificate

From ______________ and Preschool, State Licensed and Insured

This Gift Certificate entitles you to one "Free Friday" Parents Night Out

Your child or children will enjoy fun games, child friendly movie and a healthy snack.

• From 7:00PM - 10:00PM
• Good for up to Three children from the same family!
• Ages 1 month to 12 years old
• Additional hours can be requested prior to reservation for $15.00 per hour.
• Family must be willing to sign liability waiver
• PNO must be booked 2 weeks in advance.
• No credits, transfers or make-ups.
• No appointments will be accepted on Friday, March 30th

Call and book your Free Parents Night Out with ________________
Expires on --/--/2012

[daycare]

thank you so much for being the only one to respond... I was hoping that some one would catch a loop hole somewhere. I caught a few myself later before I printed it.

Thanks again...

[DaisyMamma]

Thats a great idea!

[MrsB]

Looks so good, I think I might steal it!happyface

[daycare]

wow this turned out great!!! Everyone was fighting over them at the raffle last night.

One of the families already signed up to have their PNO AND they are also taking my last full time spot!!

I am now full..............................happyfacehappyface

[beachgrl]

Awesome! Did u do this just for the raffle? Was it like a charity raffle type thing? Congrats on being full!happyface

[Crazy8]

I was thinking you are crazy for doing this for FREE for your parents, LOL! But it sounds like a great idea if it was a raffle or something..... what was it for???

[daycare]

I did it for a local charity as well as for an auction for my sons high school.

The charity event was last night and it was a huge hit. The other event is not until next month.

I feel that it was a great way to get my name out there into the community.

Oh and btw I do offer a free PNO once a month for all of my families and their kids. I love doing it and they love having it. Of course there are rules to it,. but other than that it is free for all of their kids..