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  • DaycareMama
    Daycare.com Member
    • Oct 2010
    • 621

    Need Help Proof Reading

    I am redoing my contract (finally) and I need help proof reading. If anyone would be interested in helping me I would be soooo thankful. BUT I warn you... my grammer , use of commas and run on sentences are all terrible!


    Since it would be a total act of kindness I can promise I will gladly pay it forward
  • daycare
    Advanced Daycare.com *********
    • Feb 2011
    • 16259

    #2
    i am open to it.....if you let me steal your ideas if needed......
    Last edited by Michael; 01-16-2012, 02:07 PM.

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    • daycare
      Advanced Daycare.com *********
      • Feb 2011
      • 16259

      #3
      Originally posted by daycare
      i am open to it.....if you let me steal your ideas if needed......
      oh yeah not too sure I am too much help though, I am ESL......
      Last edited by Michael; 01-16-2012, 02:07 PM.

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      • DaycareMama
        Daycare.com Member
        • Oct 2010
        • 621

        #4
        Originally posted by daycare
        oh yeah not too sure I am too much help though, I am ESL......
        Daycare... I have read MANY of your posts and can assure you that I would happily let you proof read. You are very well spoken

        And feel free to steal away! I am also open to suggestions if you feel i am missing something.

        I am just finishing up adding a few things and I will let you know when I am done. Thank you soo much happyface

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        • daycare
          Advanced Daycare.com *********
          • Feb 2011
          • 16259

          #5
          Originally posted by DaycareMama
          Daycare... I have read MANY of your posts and can assure you that I would happily let you proof read. You are very well spoken

          And feel free to steal away! I am also open to suggestions if you feel i am missing something.

          I am just finishing up adding a few things and I will let you know when I am done. Thank you soo much happyface
          awe really thanks so much....

          ok, sounds like a deal....PM me when you are done...

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          • kidkair
            Celebrating Daily!
            • Aug 2010
            • 673

            #6
            Feel free to PM it too me too. It's always good to get a couple eyes looking over things. And congrats on getting it (almost) done!
            Celebrate! ::

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            • DaycareMama
              Daycare.com Member
              • Oct 2010
              • 621

              #7
              Thanks kidkair. I will pm you both when done. Im waiting for my hubby to come show me how to link it to my email so i can send it.

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              • daycare
                Advanced Daycare.com *********
                • Feb 2011
                • 16259

                #8
                Originally posted by DaycareMama
                I am redoing my contract (finally) and I need help proof reading. If anyone would be interested in helping me I would be soooo thankful. BUT I warn you... my grammer , use of commas and run on sentences are all terrible!


                Since it would be a total act of kindness I can promise I will gladly pay it forward
                sorry I sent you a million emails....

                is this a contract or a PHB??

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                • DaycareMama
                  Daycare.com Member
                  • Oct 2010
                  • 621

                  #9
                  Oh my gosh don't be silly I appreciate the help!!

                  Its a supposed to be a contract.....but i guess its more of a handbook??

                  I guess i figured it was a contract because they are signing off .....

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