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Opinions On My Ad Please
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I like it what you say about your home, but I wouldn't put down a center. Personally, I steer clear of company that uses negatively toward the competition regardless of the service they truly offer.- Flag
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There are a lot of spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors I would fix. You want to look as professional as possible, so I'd work on those. I agree w/ the PP-highlight the positive. DO NOT put anything negative in your ad.- Flag
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I agree, check again for spelling and punctuation. I can help if you need it.
I'd also leave out the center part, as other said, and I'd try to shorten it up if possible.- Flag
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I sent you a friend request as I would love your help. I have never been very good and Grammer and not sure where to go about making it shorter- Flag
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